Fae: Beginning by Eva Blackwing
The writing did not improve any in this book and the story was worse because it is pretty obvious that she did not do any planning before writing since the lore was still not well developed. There were too many inconsistencies with the characters; the men are all still very one dimensional, and More is still acting like two different people, swinging wildly from 'all powerful' to 'I'm just a baby' and back. We added in the Camelot lore, except now Arthur is another one of her mates. And human John is apparently not actually human, but is from one of the other realms. And the fae realm, possibly others, are being poisoned, but only the people who are working against More and her boy toys. Also 80s reference earth boyfriend gets kidnapped at the end because apparently dragons can also shapeshift or take on the guise of other beings in their human forms. Like I said, the lore is not well developed. I am listening to this series because I cannot believe how bad it is, and I'm having fun sending my bestie voice messages about it. But, I will be glad when it's done and I will be avoiding this author in the future.
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